"good job, a little more info would go a long way, great music construction, and no major mistakes i could see."

"good job, a lot of info, people, explanations, etc.......no major mistakes i could see, always at the top of the class aren't you?"

"?? looks like your just playing a game or something. what was your topic? and i wouldn't move around so much it makes whoever is looking at it dizzy lol because you cant follow whats going on."

"yeh,kinda screwed it up........"

"good job,liked the music, could use a little bit of info, other wise you got the basics down, good job"

"nicely done, lots of info, people talking, etc........ i love the garage band music, good job on that!!! the only thing that you should look into is making the beginning a little less slow and cut to the chase. other wise very good, and good job…"

"i don't get it.  "

"i liked it, little blurry like savanna said but still readable, yes a little bit more info and your past golden"