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Thanks for the feedback :) and I do apologise for replying so late. I did consider how teachers could adapt the learning in other ways however due to some time constraints and a lack of research and preparation, those ideas were unable to be brought up into my final video.
If done again, I would definitely consider other ways of how Adaptive Technologies are integrated and used by teachers.
Thank you for the positive feedback! Sorry this reply is coming rather late. I don't check my school e-mail very often. In regards to your question, unfortunately, I was unable to get an outsource clip for my video (for whatever reason, my request was never fulfilled). I tried my best to make up for that by using video clips that I found on the internet. The only thing I would've done differently if I could would be that I would've put in more videos that I took myself, and I would've included an outsource clip (obviously).
Terry, I just want you to notice what you've done with the judging. The fact you leave comments on these student videos gives very important feedback. It tells the students that people notice. I helps them know that what they do matter. Well, Terry, you matter. What you're doing matters very much, thank you. You are doing a great job judging!