Here are some comments on your maker space video posted on YouTube: • You relied on text screens to make your main points, and this can be effective. In this case, there was no sound with the video, so the viewer is not as attracted – maybe you could consider some background music, or even using your own voice to help make the points? You seem to understand the topic, so a bit more use of sound and images would make the work stronger.
Hi Angel. My name is Grace and I'm a junior at Berea-Midpark high. I see you play football and I bet you are good at it. Is the weather ever bad for your football games? I used to go to my brother's football games and sometimes had to sit in rain or snow.